Monday, 6 August 2018

Bees Report ( Literacy )

{Did you know that the honey bee and all other types of bee belong to a large family of insects called Hymenoptera ? The wasp and ants also belong to the same family.Hymenoptera is a greek word meaning membane wing.} {The bees features and appearance contributes to their uniqueness.These creatures have long tongues to help them collect the nectar hidden deep down inside the flower.They have a thick coat of hair to trap pollen also.} {The bees has specific features to help them eat their food.Bees visit flowers to gather food from some of the best pollen and nectar flowers growing on plants.Some of the flower growing on the plants name are Barberry,Gorse and willow.Sometimes if the bees don't have enough food they starve to death.} {Bees are well equipped to protect itself from danger.Theybluid the honey comb and defend the hive.Bees look after their queen too.} {When bees fly a row of tiny hook joins the back wings to the front wings on each side of the body.People use honey to treat wounds as well.Bees are important to the living world without them many plants would not survive.}

2 comments:

  1. Hi, my name is Evan, I'm a year 7 student who attends Pompallier Catholic School.

    This is a very interesting piece of writing. Some feed forward is maybe separate your writing into paragraphs, and use less brackets next time.

    I'm wondering how long you have lived in New Zealand?

    Come check my blog out here's the link: http://pcsevanm.blogspot.com/

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  2. Hi Evan
    Thank you for the feedback I will be sure to do that next time. I have lived in New Zealand since I was a newborn. I will go check out your blog now.
    Moana

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